Guest Rants in Verse by Jennifer Martenson
For Whom the Leaf Blower Blows
Consumer grade cost cutters
available in mildly indifferent and turbo screw all y’all models*
shift the burden of debris
faster than you can say externality
*inline deregulators sold separately
Prélude à l’après-midi d’un leaf blower
Gunning at dawn
as if to secure
the right to water
the lawn, to leave
the engine on, to burn
what we please
and pile the debris
on someone else’s
doorstep, to adjust
one’s mask before
asphyxiating others,
a two-stroke civic
discourse at full
throttle keeps
the peace and
quiet clean.
The Aggressive Ways of the Casual Leaf Blower
“Clean up,” they say, filling the air
with dirt and exhaust. As if
you can more quickly rake in cash
by blowing it into the street.
With all the force — and foresight —
of a tornado. Such logic
flies in everyone’s face, yet passes
for rational self-interest. How
so many ignore it, I don’t know.
It screams out to be heard
from blocks away, even with
the windows closed. And the stereo on.
Out of Proportion, Endlessly Blowing
Given that it takes four
hundred cubic feet per
minute of hot
air blowing at
two hundred miles per
hour to displace the
weight of one
grass clipping
pressed to wet
cement and one
cubic yard of
chipped bark
(color enhanced)
to replace
what is blown
out from under
one square yew
(freshly shaved) by
what percentage does
the value of
hearing oneself
think decline in
the presence of
one leaf scritching
in the street
and how many wind
turbines will it take
to keep America’s
sidewalks clean
on a rainy day
in hurricane season?
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Jennifer Martenson is the author of a book of poems called Unsound (Burning Deck Press, 2010). She lives in Providence, Rhode Island, where she works as a library associate and is learning to garden after many years of garden-less apartment living.
Love them all!
Priceless!
Can we photoshop that guy out of the picture? He’s ruining an otherwise nice scene!
Thank you for lyricizing one of my biggest pet peeves! We use these leaf blowers so we can “save time” which we then spend sitting watching tv – or even worse, in my opinion, exercising at the gym (using even more nonrenewable resources to power the machines). What a horrible waste. Grown men and women standing around waving smelly, noisy wands just so we don’t have to sully our hands with a broom or rake.
Absolutely terrific! A++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
I hate leaf blowers with a passion. However, when I worked for a small garden design-landscape maintenance company, my boss demanded that I use a leaf blower. She said it was a matter of saving time, and therefore money.
I don’t know if she was right. Personally, I think I’m more competent with a rake than with a blower and therefore get clean-up done faster.
It is sad that they have become so standard and are perceived as necessary. I bet you had customers who would have appreciated the manual approach.
A group in Los Angeles tested the time savings argument in the late 90s; you’ll find it if you look for “Grandmother Proves Rake and Broom as Fast as Leaf Blowers” 🙂
So this is why someone in USA said they weren’t going to buy my book because I mentioned using a leaf blower in it!??
Not this sort of issue/use across the pond!
Sorry to hear someone turned down your book just for this! Here, they have come to be used as all-purpose brooms, and, indeed, I often see them being advertised as “sweepers” – not just for leaves! Some towns have laws limiting their use to spring and fall months, but here, I can count of hours of them most days from April through December. I do feel for those in climates without the winter break.
Leaf blowers are an abomination–they sort of embody all the worst attributes of the industrial age, don’t they? In contrast, these poems are fabulous. Thank you!
Thank you to all for your kind comments. 🙂
Jennifer, you are a genius, and you have said so eloquently everything that I feel and think when I am assaulted by the sound and stink of these infernal noisemakers.
I hate the noisy things! They have actually banned them in many neighborhoods here.
In the UK we should develop a similar device for sucking up slugs and firing them back into Spain! We are expecting an outbreak of Spanish Slugs that have breached our borders from Europe. Count yourselves very lucky that in the states you have great border control… Watch those supermarket salad imports – you never know who’s catching a ride!
Not to worry
It will be here soon
Offended ears rejoice
The total corporate takeover
The middle class is screwed
Plenty jobs with rakes and brooms
The demand for such will boom
All will serve the wealthy lords
Who buy up all your suburbia
Practice now
Teach your kids
Grab that rake or broom
In pleasant silence you will clean
All that once was yours
There is one thing I know for sure
The well to do like things clean
And gain a certain pleasure
By having others do
The peasant life is quiet
There will be no need for speed or power
Put on your babushka
Now hush
That mile of road to sweep
Is for you
Ms. Martenson: Will you be my neighbor?
Christopher in NC: I’m missing something. Are you saying a heavy, awkward, noisy leafblower (for which almost no lawn-company in my area seems to require eye or hearing protection!) is less physically demanding than a rake/broom? Or less demeaning? I’ll never be able to afford a lawn-care company, but I do like to sweep the leaves off my sidewalks; they can be a slippery safety hazard when rained on.
Sandy do you think spending eight to ten hours a day raking or pushing a broom would be physically taxing? Would you look down on the person doing that job? Your answers do not matter. You thought about it and questioned it. That’s good enough.
Oh c’mon Christopher, let’s just photoshop the guy out of picture and pretend he doesn’t exist. That lady who uses the vacuum cleaner to sweep my office building needs to switch to a broom. And don’t get me started on the street sweepers that drive down the block at all hours of the afternoon!
Sweeping/raking for 8-10 hours at a stretch? Very taxing. But I truly believe that I, personally, would be far worse taxed by the leaf-blower. (Yes, I’ve used both, even if for shorter periods. I don’t speak in total ignorance.)
I hope I never look down on anyone doing manual labor . . . why should I?
Ha ha — Awesome!
Noise, fumes, gas and oil, are not part of our garden.
Truth in your humor, Christopher–or is it humor in your truth?
I’m not sure if I dislike leaf-blowing idiots or early spring burners more. The first fine days of spring, when you’re so very happy to be outdoors, and here comes the smoke. Seems like there is always plastic hidden in their burn pile, too. Enough grousing!
I’ve been in the lawn business for over 10 years, and I’m always surprise by how irritated people get regarding leaf blowers. That being said, I do try and use one in the least annoying way as possible.